Journal #8 – My FC Workshop

As my feature was workshopped today, I found plenty of useful information for my editing and revision process as I move forward with this draft. I went into this workshop knowing I needed to include more perspectives about the GUST programs from students and faculty, but I had no idea how to cut down on what I already had. As it stands, before I begin editing, I am at 749 words. Once asked for advice on this matter, I gained a few insightful ideas that will aid in my process of cutting down, while also continuing to build the significance. Being able to siphon out the details that may be unnecessary is something I will have to work on, in addition to really focusing on the angle. My next steps are to reach out to a faculty member, likely Michael Cripps and Dean Millen, for an interview or even just a statement, in addition to a potential student contact who is now an upperclassman. I will begin looking for places where information is too wordy or not focused on the angle and intended impact. Overall, this workshopping experience is valuable for any journalist, and I look forward to seeing what I can refine.

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